Story 9.4: Miss Eleanor\"s Eyes

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Story 9.4: Miss Eleanor"s Eyes

The old house stood on a tree-lined street near the venerable Wick Park, a grand Victorian dame gone slightly, melancholically to seed, which was precisely the reason the Miller family – Anne, David, and their seven-year-old daughter, Lily – could afford it after relocating to Youngstown for David"s new job (9.4.1). It possessed what the realtor had euphemistically called "character": peeling paint on the ornate trim, a porch that sagged slightly to one side, floors that creaked like arthritic joints, and the faint, persistent scent of dust and decades past. They spent the first few chaotic weeks after moving in exploring its dusty corners, peeling back layers of forgotten history beneath faded wallpaper and behind loose baseboards. It was Lily, naturally curious and small enough to investigate the most cramped spaces, who made the discovery. Tucked away in a heavy, dome-topped trunk in the farthest, darkest, cobweb-draped corner of the sprawling attic, beneath piles of moth-eaten woolen blankets and brittle, yellowed newspapers dated from the 1920s, she found the doll (9.4.1). It was a large porcelain doll, nearly two feet tall, clearly antique. It had startlingly lifelike, unblinking blue glass eyes that seemed unnervingly aware, possessing that uncanny ability to appear to follow you around the room. A serene, slightly enigmatic smile was painted onto its delicate bisque face, and it wore faded, intricately lace-trimmed clothing that crumbled slightly at the touch (9.4.1). Its porcelain face was finely crazed, like delicate webbing beneath the surface, and one tiny, perfectly formed porcelain hand had a chipped index finger, but otherwise, it was remarkably, almost eerily, preserved (9.4.1). Lily, whose previous dolls were mostly plastic and modern, was instantly, utterly captivated by its antique fragility and lifelike gaze.

Her mother, Anne, hesitated when Lily brought it downstairs, cradling it carefully. The doll was undeniably beautiful in its way, but also undeniably fragile, and Anne couldn"t shake a faint feeling of unease emanating from its fixed stare – it looked, frankly, a bit creepy. But Lily pleaded with wide, earnest eyes, already smitten. After a careful, gentle cleaning with a damp cloth, removing decades of attic grime, the doll, newly christened "Miss Eleanor" by Lily – an oddly formal, old-fashioned name for a seven-year-old to choose seemingly out of thin air – was allowed residence in Lily"s brightly decorated bedroom (9.4.1).

Miss Eleanor quickly became Lily"s constant, inseparable companion, displacing her other toys with surprising speed (9.4.2). She sat propped opposite Lily at the small, child-sized play table during elaborate, silent tea parties. She attended patiently, eyes fixed forward, during nightly story time sessions, perched on the bedside table. She occupied a place of honor on Lily"s pillow at night, her glass eyes staring blankly at the ceiling in the darkness. Anne often overheard Lily chatting away animatedly to the doll through the bedroom door, detailed, one-sided monologues about her day at the new school, her nascent friendships, her feelings, her complex imaginary games. "Miss Eleanor says the blue crayon is the prettiest, Mommy," Lily would report solemnly at the dinner table, or "Miss Eleanor doesn"t like carrots, so I can"t eat them either." Initially, Anne saw it as intense, perhaps slightly eccentric, imaginative play – perfectly normal, even healthy, for a sensitive child adjusting to a new house, a new city, and the absence of familiar friends. Still, Anne sometimes caught the doll"s glassy stare from across the room and felt an uncomfortable prickle, as if she were being observed, judged, by those unblinking blue eyes (9.4.2).

Then, subtle but persistent shifts began to manifest in Lily"s behavior, small deviations from her usual personality that started to accumulate (9.4.3). She began using archaic phrases and mannerisms Anne had certainly never taught her and hadn"t heard from anyone else – "Indeed," "Quite so," "If you please," delivered with a strange, unchildlike gravity. Her posture sometimes seemed unnaturally stiff and formal for a young, usually boisterous girl, her back held rigidly straight, her hands folded primly in her lap. She developed a sudden, intense fascination with pressing flowers found in the garden and arranging them in old books, an activity far removed from her previous interests in building blocks and running games. She started requesting, even demanding, that Anne read her stories exclusively about "the olden days," rejecting her usual favorites about talking animals or adventurous children (9.4.3). She became quieter overall, more withdrawn and secretive, sometimes just sitting silently on her bed for long stretches, staring intently at Miss Eleanor with an unnerving, focused intensity, as if receiving silent instructions. There were also moments of unexplained melancholy, brief, fleeting flashes of a profound seriousness or sadness that didn"t seem to belong on a seven-year-old"s face (9.4.3). Anne tried to rationalize it – kids pick things up from unexpected places, maybe it was the influence of a new teacher at school, maybe it was just the slightly somber atmosphere of the old house itself seeping into her sensitive daughter"s psyche – but a persistent thread of deep unease began to weave itself around Anne"s heart (9.4.3).

The doll"s perceived desires and opinions started dictating Lily"s actions more forcefully, moving beyond simple pronouncements about crayons or carrots (9.4.4). "Miss Eleanor wants me to wear the yellow dress today," Lily would insist with uncharacteristic stubbornness, even if the weather was cold and rainy, leading to morning battles over appropriate attire. "Miss Eleanor doesn"t like noisy games," she"d whisper reproachfully, withdrawing from her visiting cousins during a lively family gathering to play quietly alone with the doll in a corner, ignoring their calls to join in (9.4.4). Anne tried gently reasoning with her, attempting to separate the doll"s supposed preferences from Lily"s own. "Honey, Miss Eleanor is a beautiful doll, but she doesn"t really want things or feel things. Those are your feelings." Lily"s response was instant, fierce, and startling: "Yes, she does! She told me! You just don"t listen to her!" Her eyes flashed with an anger Anne had rarely seen (9.4.4). Small, puzzling transgressions followed: Lily inexplicably hid her father"s car keys just before he needed to leave for work, later claiming, with an odd little smile, that Miss Eleanor thought it would be a funny trick. She flatly refused to eat her dinner one evening, pushing the plate away and stating firmly that Miss Eleanor "wasn"t hungry tonight" (9.4.4). The lines between Lily and the doll seemed to be blurring in a deeply unsettling way.

The doll"s influence, or perhaps Lily"s perception of it, took a darker, more hostile turn (9.4.5). When Anne suggested, gently but firmly, that maybe Miss Eleanor should stay home while Lily went to a classmate"s upcoming birthday party, Lily flew into a terrifying, unprecedented rage. She screamed, kicked, threw herself on the floor, sobbing hysterically that Anne was "mean" and "cruel" and that Miss Eleanor hated her now (9.4.5). The intensity of the reaction was shocking, far beyond a typical childhood tantrum. Around the same time, the family"s normally placid and affectionate cat, Jasper, began actively avoiding Lily"s room, sometimes pausing at the doorway and hissing before backing away. If Lily tried to approach Jasper while holding Miss Eleanor, the cat would flatten its ears, growl, and dart away – behavior completely out of character. One afternoon, Anne found one of Lily"s recent drawings left near the doll"s feet on the bedroom floor. It depicted a crude stick figure labeled "Mommy" with angry, violent red scribbles slashed all over it (9.4.5). The possessiveness Lily displayed towards the doll became absolute; if Anne even tried to move Miss Eleanor slightly to dust the nightstand, Lily would snatch the doll away, cradling it protectively and glaring at Anne with cold, suspicious eyes (9.4.5). This wasn"t imaginative play anymore. This felt like something invasive, something alien, looking out at Anne from behind her own daughter"s familiar blue eyes.

Thoroughly alarmed now, Anne started researching the history of the house itself, desperate for any clue, any explanation for the disturbing changes in her daughter (9.4.6). She spent hours at the Mahoning Valley Historical Society"s library, poring over dusty old city directories, property records, and census data. After several frustrating dead ends, she found them: the Davies family, who had resided in their house from approximately 1910 until the late 1940s. Records showed they had a daughter named Eleanor Davies. With mounting dread, Anne searched newspaper archives and found a brief, faded obituary notice. Eleanor Davies had died in the house in the winter of 1928, at the tender age of eight, a victim of the virulent influenza epidemic that swept through the region that year (9.4.6). The obituary described Eleanor briefly as a "quiet, serious child, beloved by her family." A chilling, sickening realization washed over Anne, cold and sharp. Miss Eleanor. Lily"s sudden adoption of that specific name. Lily"s disturbing behavioral shifts – the formality, the seriousness, the melancholy, the possessiveness, the hostility towards Anne… was her daughter somehow channeling, or worse, being influenced or possessed by, the spirit of the little girl who had died in this very house, perhaps even in this very room, nearly a century ago? Was the doll, likely Eleanor Davies" own cherished possession, acting as a conduit (9.4.6)?

Anne"s mind raced through terrifying possibilities. Was the doll a literal vessel for Eleanor"s spirit, trapped between worlds, lonely and desperately seeking companionship, or perhaps resentful of the healthy child now living in her room, playing with her toy (9.4.7 Theory 1)? Had the doll, present during Eleanor"s illness and death, somehow absorbed the trauma, fear, and sadness of the sick room, now passively radiating that toxic emotional residue onto Lily, influencing her moods and behavior (9.4.7 Theory 2)? Or was it, perhaps, less supernatural – simply a focal point for Lily"s own anxieties about the move, the new environment, amplified by the undeniably atmospheric, slightly spooky old house (9.4.7 Theory 3)? But the influence felt too specific, too targeted, too intelligent to be random environmental factors or simple anxiety.

Anne knew, with a mother"s fierce certainty, that the doll had to go. Immediately (9.4.8). She waited until Lily was deeply asleep, the house silent except for the old timbers settling. Steeling her nerves, she crept into Lily"s moonlit room and carefully, slowly lifted Miss Eleanor from her place of honor on the pillow beside Lily"s head. The doll felt unnaturally heavy in her hands, its porcelain skin cold, its glass eyes seeming to glint with malevolent awareness in the dim light filtering through the window. As Anne turned silently to leave the room, clutching the doll, Lily suddenly sat bolt upright in bed. Her eyes were wide open but completely unseeing, fixed on the empty space Anne occupied moments before. Then, Lily let out a piercing, bloodcurdling shriek – not a child"s cry of distress, but a sound of pure, adult rage and profound loss that echoed terrifyingly through the silent house (9.4.8). Anne froze, paralyzed by terror, then fled the room as if pursued, stumbling down the stairs and hiding the doll deep within a linen closet downstairs, burying it beneath stacks of towels.

The next few days were unmitigated hell. Lily was utterly inconsolable, swinging wildly between furious, violent tantrums – screaming, hitting, throwing things – and withdrawn, listless, almost catatonic silence (9.4.8). She refused to eat more than a few bites, refused to play with any other toys, refused to get dressed or leave her room. She would just sit on her bed, staring blankly at the empty spot on her pillow where Miss Eleanor used to be, sometimes whispering the name, "Eleanor? Eleanor?" in a lost, heartbroken voice (9.4.8). Anne felt monstrous, consumed by guilt for causing her daughter such distress, but also deeply terrified. What had that doll done to her child? What hold did it, or the spirit associated with it, have (9.4.9)? Explaining the situation fully to her husband, David, proved difficult. He saw Lily"s extreme, disturbing reaction, but struggled to accept that a porcelain doll was truly the root cause, suggesting grief counseling for Lily, family therapy, or other psychological explanations rather than supernatural ones (9.4.9). Anne felt profoundly isolated, fighting what felt like an invisible, insidious enemy for her own child"s soul, her sanity questioned even by her partner (9.4.9).

Slowly, painstakingly, over weeks that felt like months, Lily began to emerge from the suffocating fog of Miss Eleanor"s absence (9.4.10). The violent tantrums lessened in frequency and intensity. She started eating small amounts again, picking listlessly at her food but consuming enough to ease Anne"s immediate worry. She began engaging tentatively with her parents, responding to questions, offering brief smiles. She even started playing quietly with her other toys again, though without her previous enthusiasm. The old-fashioned phrases and stiff formality gradually faded from her speech and posture. But something fundamental had changed. A wariness remained in Lily"s eyes, a shadow of the unnatural seriousness that Miss Eleanor had brought into their lives. The easy, bubbly joy of her earlier childhood seemed muted, overlaid with a subtle, lingering melancholy (9.4.10). Anne kept the doll hidden away, wrapped in layers of cloth inside a sealed box in the deepest corner of the basement now, contemplating burying it in the yard, burning it in the fireplace, or taking it far away and disposing of it, anything to ensure it never came back into their lives.

One rainy afternoon, months later, when a fragile sense of normalcy had begun to settle over the household, Anne walked past Lily"s room and paused, hearing her daughter chattering happily. Peeking in, she saw Lily sitting on her bedroom floor, surrounded by her other dolls and stuffed animals, seemingly engrossed in imaginative play. Relief washed over Anne, warm and profound. Maybe it was over. Maybe Lily was finally, truly herself again. Then Lily looked up, catching Anne"s eye. She was holding a simple, blonde Barbie doll. "Mommy," Lily said, her voice quiet, calm, and unnervingly flat, devoid of inflection, "Barbie says she doesn"t like it when you come in my room without knocking first. She says… it"s impolite." Lily held Anne"s gaze for a long, unnerving moment, her expression completely unreadable, before turning back to her play as if nothing significant had been said (9.4.10). Anne stood frozen in the doorway, a familiar cold dread seeping back into her bones, prickling her skin. Miss Eleanor, the porcelain vessel, might be gone, locked away in the dark. But her influence, her quiet insistence, her possessive spirit… perhaps it hadn"t entirely left the building. Perhaps it had just found a new, more modern host (9.4.10).


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