Story 1.3: The Unseen Critic

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Story 1.3: The Unseen Critic

The ancient fluorescent lights of Morley Hall, Youngstown State University’s venerable arts building, hummed a lonely, buzzing tune that seemed to amplify the profound silence of the late hour. They cast long, distorted, sickly yellow shadows down the empty third-floor corridor, transforming familiar doorways and alcoves into pockets of deep gloom. Built in an era when solidity, permanence, and perhaps a touch of imposing gothic aspiration defined campus architecture, Morley Hall felt particularly cavernous and watchful after midnight. Its thick, institutional brick walls seemed to absorb the daytime cacophony of student chatter, clanging equipment, and echoing music practice, only to exhale a profound, almost sentient silence when the sun went down and the building emptied. Maya Reyes, a dedicated sculpture major pouring her soul, sweat, and considerable anxiety into a looming, ambitious piece of welded steel in the cavernous Studio 3B, knew this silence intimately. It was usually punctuated by the familiar, comforting groans and clanks of the ancient steam heating system kicking on unpredictably, the distant, mournful rumble of a freight train passing on the tracks that bordered the university campus, or the occasional furtive, unseen scuttle of a mouse within the walls – sounds that grounded her in the mundane reality of the old building. Tonight, however, the silence felt different. Heavier, somehow charged, pregnant with an unspoken tension, as if the building itself were holding its breath, waiting.

She was carefully adjusting the gas flow on the MIG welder, the sharp, acrid scent of ozone stinging her nostrils, mingling with the earthy smell of damp clay from a neighboring potter’s station and the faint, lingering sweetness of turpentine from the painters down the hall. The intense blue-white arc hissed and spat as she prepared to lay another bead of molten metal onto her creation – a complex, abstract form suggesting struggle and emergence. It was then she heard it, cutting through the welder’s noise: footsteps. Distinct, measured steps, echoing clearly from the polished, worn linoleum of the hallway just outside her heavy studio door. They sounded like someone wearing hard-soled shoes, perhaps old-fashioned leather oxfords, walking with a steady, deliberate pace. She paused instantly, tilting her head, listening intently over the dying hiss of the welder. Probably just campus security on their late-night rounds, she reasoned, though they rarely ventured up to the somewhat isolated third-floor art studios unless specifically called for an issue. Still, working alone this late always carried a baseline level of caution. “Hello?” she called out, her voice sounding surprisingly small and thin in the vast, high-ceilinged studio space. She pulled off her heavy, smoked-glass welding mask, her dark hair sticking damply to her forehead. The footsteps stopped abruptly, mid-stride. Silence flooded back in immediately, thick and expectant, pressing against her eardrums like a physical weight. Maya walked quickly to the heavy wooden studio door, pulled it open a crack, and peered down the long, dimly lit corridor. Nothing. Just the relentless, annoying flicker of a dying fluorescent tube at the far end, casting unreliable, strobing light, and the faint, greenish glow from the exit sign above the stairwell door casting eerie highlights on the waxed floor. Odd. Very odd. Maybe they’d turned down the intersecting hallway towards the music practice rooms, though she hadn’t heard the distinctive heavy thud of the fire door opening or closing. Shrugging, trying consciously to shake off a sudden, unwelcome prickle of unease crawling up her spine, she closed the studio door firmly and went back to her sculpture, attributing the sound to the building’s notoriously tricky acoustics, known among students for carrying sounds in strange, unpredictable ways, making whispers travel corridors and footsteps appear where none existed.

A little while later, perhaps half an hour, she was using a noisy angle grinder to smooth down a particularly rough, uneven weld, a shower of bright orange sparks cascading onto the scarred concrete floor around her feet. Suddenly, an intense, localized chill enveloped her right arm, the one holding the heavy grinder. It was so abrupt and specific it felt like stepping partially into a walk-in freezer or being blasted by a targeted stream of icy air. Goosebumps erupted instantly on her skin, and she gasped, almost certain she could see her breath fogging for a split second in the suddenly frigid air immediately surrounding her limb. She looked around wildly, heart suddenly pounding. The studio door remained closed, the tall, drafty windows overlooking the dark campus green were sealed tight against the cool spring night. No drafts. No open vents nearby. The chill lingered for several seconds, unnervingly focused entirely on her arm and the space immediately around it, a tangible pocket of unnatural cold, then vanished as quickly and inexplicably as it had appeared, leaving her skin tingling. “Okay, that was definitely weird,” she muttered aloud to the empty studio, rubbing her arm vigorously, trying to restore normal feeling and dismiss the strangeness. Faulty HVAC system acting up? Maybe one of the ceiling vents had malfunctioned momentarily. But the intense specificity of it, the feeling of it being directed precisely at her working arm, combined with the earlier phantom footsteps, left a persistent residue of deep unease that the grinder’s subsequent roar couldn’t quite drown out.

Over the next few weeks, as Maya continued her nocturnal vigils in Studio 3B, driven by approaching deadlines and the particular creative energy that only seemed to flow for her in the dead of night, the strange phenomena became unwelcome but disturbingly regular companions. The footsteps were almost predictable now, a recurring feature of her late-night soundscape. They always seemed to pace the corridor just outside Studio 3B, sometimes sounding hesitant and shuffling, like someone uncertain or searching, other times firm and purposeful, like an inspector making rounds. They invariably stopped if she opened the door or called out, melting back instantly into the building’s ambient groans and hums, only to resume minutes later once she returned to her work. The cold spots also returned with unsettling frequency, often materializing in the same general area of the studio – near a tall, dusty metal shelving unit stacked high with forgotten plaster molds, bags of hardened clay, and abandoned student projects from semesters past – or sometimes manifesting right behind her as she bent over her worktable, raising the fine hairs on the back of her neck with an icy breath. She started keeping a mental log, a habit born more of anxiety than scientific curiosity: footsteps usually around 1:15 AM, cold spot near the shelves typically around 2:30 AM, sometimes later. The predictability didn’t make it less creepy; paradoxically, it made it feel more deliberate, more like the established habits of an unseen, territorial resident sharing her workspace.

One night, while taking a much-needed coffee break and stretching her aching back, she ran into Ben Carter, a music composition major she knew vaguely, who often practiced late in one of the soundproofed rooms on the floor below. Gathering her courage, feeling slightly foolish, she cautiously mentioned the pacing footsteps she kept hearing outside her studio. Ben’s eyes widened slightly, but more in recognition than surprise. “Dude, the Morley Pacer?” he said, nodding. “Yeah, totally. Everyone who works late in this building knows about that. Especially third floor art wing. Freaked me right out the first time I heard it practicing late one night. Swear I thought someone was trying to get into the practice room, just walking back and forth outside the door.” He went on to share other stories he’d heard whispered among students in the music and art departments – faint, disembodied whispers sometimes heard near the ceramics studio on the second floor, heavy studio doors known to creak open slowly or slam shut violently on their own when no one was near, and the infamous wandering cold spots that seemed to migrate unpredictably through the upper levels of the building. Apparently, Morley Hall had a well-earned, if officially unacknowledged, reputation for being haunted. Some attributed the oddities to the lingering spirit of a former, notoriously demanding and critical art professor who had practically lived in his third-floor office and died there suddenly decades ago. Others whispered about a talented music student who had tragically died by suicide in one of the practice rooms during a particularly stressful finals week in the 1980s. Hearing Ben’s casual acceptance, and the fragmented, varied stories from others he relayed, was strangely validating for Maya. She wasn’t just overtired or letting the spooky old building get to her imagination. The “Morley Ghost,” or perhaps ghosts, whatever it was, was a known, if unexplained, part of the building’s unsettling nocturnal character.

However, knowing she wasn’t alone in experiencing the strangeness didn’t stop the phenomena from escalating, becoming bolder, more intrusive, almost… personal. The character of the footsteps began to change unpredictably. Sometimes they sounded lighter, quicker, almost frantic, like someone running in panic down the corridor, only to abruptly cease. Other times, a heavy, dragging sound accompanied the steps, as if something cumbersome, like a heavy sack or a reluctant body, were being pulled laboriously along the linoleum floor just outside her door. One particularly unnerving night, she heard what sounded distinctly like muffled, heartbroken sobbing coming from the empty studio directly next door to hers – a space currently used only for storing broken easels and discarded canvases. The sobbing was followed by a loud crash from within the locked room, as if something heavy, like a plaster bust or a stack of shelves, had been violently thrown against the shared wall. Maya froze, heart pounding against her ribs, every nerve ending screaming, but forced herself to investigate, grabbing a heavy pipe wrench she used for bending metal rods. She crept to the adjacent studio door. It was dark, locked tight as expected. Peering through the small, grimy wire-glass window in the door, everything inside looked undisturbed in the deep gloom, coated in a thick layer of dust. The sounds became more interactive, too, losing their previously random, ambient quality. If she accidentally dropped a heavy tool with a loud clatter, the footsteps outside might pause abruptly, then resume faster, seemingly agitated or startled. If she played music on her small portable speaker to break the oppressive silence, sometimes a faint, mournful sighing sound, like wind through reeds, would seem to weave itself through the melody, just at the absolute edge of her hearing, disappearing if she tried to focus on it. It felt less like random echoes and residual energy replay and more like… reactions. The presence, whatever it was, seemed to be making itself harder to ignore, harder to dismiss as mere building quirks.

The physical sensations also intensified, becoming more pronounced and harder to rationalize. The cold spots became bitingly cold, making her teeth chatter involuntarily even through her layers of clothing, and sometimes lingered for minutes at a time, leaving the air in that specific area feeling dead, heavy, and strangely still long after the tangible chill itself had passed. On two separate occasions, while reaching for supplies high up on the tall metal shelving unit – the persistent hotspot corner – she felt a distinct, unmistakable, icy brush against the back of her exposed neck, accompanied by the overwhelming, primal feeling of being watched intently from inches away, as if someone were standing directly behind her, scrutinizing her every move. She’d spun around violently both times, wrench in hand, finding only empty air and dancing dust motes in the harsh studio light, but the sensation was terrifyingly real, visceral. Around the same time, the overhead fluorescent lights directly above her main workstation began to flicker intermittently, buzzing erratically like dying insects, sometimes dimming significantly before flaring back to life. She noted with growing dread that this electrical anomaly seemed to occur almost exclusively when the phantom footsteps were pacing nearby in the corridor or when the intense cold spot manifested in the corner by the shelves. Coincidence? Faulty wiring in an old building? Maybe. But the timing felt increasingly suspect, too precise, too correlated to be random chance. The boundary between the unseen and the seen, the explainable and the inexplicable, felt like it was thinning, becoming porous, fragile.

Maya, increasingly unnerved but also fueled by a stubborn, perhaps reckless, curiosity inherent in her artistic nature, started digging deeper into the building’s past. She spent hours she should have been sleeping or studying poring over microfilmed archives in the Maag Library basement and searching obscure online university historical databases, looking for any official record of deaths, accidents, suicides, or significant tragedies specifically associated with Morley Hall, particularly the third-floor art wing. She found yellowed newspaper articles celebrating the building’s grand opening in the early 20th century, detailed architectural plans showing various renovations and additions over the decades, faculty directories listing long-retired professors, but nothing concrete about deaths occurring within its walls. Campus legends, however, were plentiful but frustratingly vague and often contradictory – the heartbroken music student who supposedly jumped from a third-floor window (though official records showed no such incident), the overworked, tyrannical professor found dead of a heart attack at his desk late one night (again, unverified by any official source), the campus janitor who simply vanished without a trace mid-shift sometime in the 1950s, leaving his mop bucket behind. One persistent story, passed down primarily through generations of art students and whispered during late-night critiques, mentioned a highly promising, fiercely intense sculpture student named Sarah Kline from the turbulent early 1970s. Sarah, the story went, became increasingly erratic and obsessed with her monumental final project, practically living in her assigned studio (rumored by some older faculty to have been 3B, Maya’s current space) before abruptly dropping out mid-semester and vanishing entirely from university records, never heard from again. Could the pacing footsteps be Sarah, still driven, still pacing the bounds of her creative prison, trapped in an endless loop of artistic fervor and ultimate despair? Could the cold spots be pockets of her unresolved artistic frustration, her sorrow, her critical judgment? It was pure speculation, lacking any shred of concrete proof, but it gave the unsettling phenomena a possible, tragic face, a narrative Maya could almost grasp, making the haunting feel less abstract, more personal.

Was it Sarah Kline, forever bound to the space where her artistic dreams perhaps consumed her whole? Or was it simply residual energy, the building itself acting like a vast, passive recording medium, replaying powerful echoes of intense emotions – frustration, concentration, despair, creative ecstasy – soaked into its very walls and floors over decades of artistic struggle and triumph? Maybe, she sometimes wondered, it wasn’t human at all, but something elemental, non-corporeal, drawn to the raw creative energy poured out in these studios day after day, night after night, feeding on the passion, the angst, the very act of creation. The pacing footsteps felt so purposeful at times, almost critical, as if evaluating the work happening within the studios. The cold spots often felt judgmental, emanating a palpable sense of disapproval or disappointment. Was the presence watching her work? Was it an unseen collaborator, offering silent, chilling encouragement through its persistent presence? Or was it, as she increasingly suspected, an unseen critic, forever dissatisfied, forever pacing, forever judging the efforts of the living artists who dared to occupy its space? The ambiguity gnawed at her, adding another layer of psychological tension to the already stressful, demanding life of an art student nearing graduation.

One particularly frustrating night, Maya was struggling intensely with her main project, the centerpiece of her upcoming senior show. A crucial weld simply wouldn’t hold properly, threatening the structural integrity of the entire complex piece. Worse, the overall composition felt unbalanced, clumsy, derivative, utterly wrong. Hours of work seemed wasted. She threw down her welding gloves in sheer exasperation, slumping onto a nearby metal stool, burying her face in her grease-stained hands, fighting back tears of frustration and exhaustion. Right on cue, as if summoned by her despair, the familiar footsteps started their slow, deliberate patrol just outside the studio door, each heavy step echoing her own profound sense of failure. Then, a wave of intense cold rolled into the studio from the corner near the shelves, colder than she had ever felt it before, making her skin prickle painfully. But this time, it was accompanied by a distinct feeling, an overwhelming psychic impression that flooded her mind – not sadness or anger, but profound, withering disappointment. A heavy, palpable sense of artistic dissatisfaction, sharp, clear, and utterly dismissive. It pressed down on Maya, mirroring her own self-criticism but amplifying it tenfold, making her feel intensely scrutinized, hopelessly inadequate, and irrevocably found wanting by an invisible, impossible, spectral standard. “Alright, alright, I get it! It sucks! It’s terrible!” she suddenly yelled at the empty, freezing corner, the words tearing out of her throat, half-joking desperation, half-genuinely unnerved and defensive against the crushing weight of the unseen judgment. The cold spot intensified dramatically for a breathtaking moment, the air crackling with palpable static electricity, making the fine hairs on her arms stand straight on end, and then, just as suddenly, it completely dissipated, vanishing without a trace. The footsteps outside faded quickly away down the hall, leaving an abrupt, ringing silence.

Maya learned, slowly, cautiously, to coexist with her unseen critic, her spectral studio-mate. She still worked late in Studio 3B – she had to, deadlines loomed large and her best creative inspiration often struck only in the deep, quiet solitude of the night. When the footsteps started their nightly patrol, she’d sometimes pause her work, listening for a moment, acknowledging the presence with a silent nod towards the door or occasionally a muttered, slightly sarcastic greeting like, “Making your rounds again?” When the cold spot formed in its usual corner, she’d shiver and pull her worn flannel jacket tighter around her shoulders but keep working, occasionally even muttering comments about her progress or her frustrations towards the chill, as if addressing a silent, invisible mentor or a particularly harsh visiting critic. She never felt truly threatened, not physically harmed, just… perpetually observed. Judged, perhaps. Criticized, almost certainly. The phenomena became an ingrained part of her strange studio routine, an unsettling but familiar quirk of her chosen creative space, a literal ghost in the machine of art.

Months later, near the very end of the spring semester, Maya was pulling yet another all-nighter, frantically putting the final finishing touches – polishing metal, applying patina, adjusting lighting – on her ambitious final project for the senior exhibition. A new freshman student, wide-eyed and clearly nervous about being alone in the sprawling, dark building so late, was working fitfully on a rudimentary ceramics project in the studio across the hall, the door propped open. Around 1:15 AM, right on schedule, Maya heard the familiar, measured footsteps start their slow patrol down the corridor from the direction of the stairwell. A moment later, she heard a startled yelp from the freshman’s studio. Maya poked her head out her own door. The freshman was standing frozen in his doorway, staring with wide, terrified eyes at the empty, echoing corridor. “Did you… did you just hear that? Footsteps? But there’s no one here!” he whispered, his voice trembling slightly. Maya offered him a knowing, slightly weary smile, the smile of a veteran initiated into Morley Hall’s nocturnal secrets. “Yeah,” she said calmly. “Just the Morley Pacer. Standard haunting. Gets everyone eventually. Don’t worry, it doesn’t bite. Usually. You get used to it. Mostly.” She gave him a reassuring nod and turned back to her own work, carefully adjusting a small, crucial detail on her now nearly complete sculpture, as the phantom footsteps faded away once more down the dimly lit hall, leaving only the incessant, maddening hum of the old fluorescent lights and the lingering, electric chill of creative intensity, both living and spectral, hanging heavy in the air. The muses, it seemed, weren’t the only restless spirits walking these hallowed, haunted halls of artistic endeavor.


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